Tuesday, April 22, 2008

First draft fiction

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=372703043

Shooter Magavin

4 comments:

Jessica13 said...
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Jessica13 said...

good job. Maybe add more cause it's kind of boring. maybe give an example on what your 'shooter magavin' does on an average day. also you could have blogs on different people he meets...or maybe the chameleon he was living with for awhile...

Jessica13 said...

i dont know why you deleted my other comment...??

WonderBunny said...

I wonder...would an animal give there size in feet and inches or just "I'm a big guy" response? I can't see them giving feet and inches.

It is great that you have links to friends already. Maybe a blog post about the day in the life if your pet would be nice to. What do they think about humans, or people tapping on their cage, what they think about the cage.

Also, the background picture is a little over exposed, I like the design of it but the bright spots are a little rough on the eyes.